I like this version of Gaudete.
Zombiepirate
joined 2 years ago
I'm always a little bit scared that what I'm listening to will start blasting out of my phone speaker because I forgot to turn on my headset or something.
Same. I like Spielberg, but after reading the book I can't imagine I'd like the movie!
There's mind-blowingly bad stuff in the world building.
I hope you just coined "ritualistic sewer slide," because that's great.
Yeah, I was a third of the way through and realized it kinda sucked. I did stick it out to the end though.
One of the plot points has the main character literally act out scenes from classic movies. It's never a good idea to remind the reader that there's better entertainment that they could be enjoying right now.
You could get hired as a consultant for a state-of-the-art zoo.